Eurokom Unicef

akin62

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Hallo leute ich brauche dringend Hilfe ich hab am freitag eurokom. Und bitte euch um 2 Sachen.. Spätestens am Mittwoch bräuchte ich es
1. Die rot makierten Sätze sind noch zu kompliziert könnt ihr mir da helfen?
2. Wenn ihr noch Fehler findet verbessert sie bitte

HIER DER TEXT AUF ENGLISCH

EUROKOM ENGLISCH

Good Morning…My name is Akin. Today I like to tell you something about UNICEF. First I would like to tell you about what UNICEF do, secondly about the history from UNICEF. Thirdly I would like to tell you about UNICEF International and UNICEF Germany. And at last about the success from UNICEF.


UNICEF means

U = United
N = Nations
I = International
C = Children
E = Emergency
F = Fund

What do UNICEF?
UNICEF is the world organization for children's rights. UNICEF helps girls and boys in 150 countries and problem zones around the world. UNICEF supply children in the world with medical, builds water-wells and supply school-materials for millions of children. UNICEF but also helps to protect children from AIDS and from crime.

UNICEF history
UNICEF was established on December 11, 1946
At the beginning UNICEF a was emergency organization. In the 50s was always more the help for the countries of Africa.
So UNICEF has been a development organization. In 1965 UNICEF gets the Nobel Peace Prize

UNICEF International
UNICEF International is the only UN organization with volunteers. UNICEF works in over 150 countries. They offer fast help to the World. The warehouse is in Copenhagen. UNICEF is funded entirely by voluntary funds and donations. UNICEF is funded entirely by voluntary funds and donations. A criterion for the selection of a project is the country's infant mortality rate. The largest regional focus is Sub-Saharan Africa with 52.4%. The budget of UNICEF, International is more than 2 billion U.S. $. The UNICEF headquarters are located in New York, then the donations will be distributed to aid projects. UNICEF has 7000 full-time staff worldwide 90% of them work in the UNICEF program countries. UNICEF has a global presence.

UNICEF Germany
Was founded in 1953. UNICEF Germany is no government funding. UNICEF Germany to work for 92 full-time employees and 8,000 volunteers. UNICEF Germany has conquered through greeting cards, gifts and scenario campaign some 21 million euros.

Success of UNICEF
The number of children enrolled has increased. Infant mortality has been halved since 1950. Each year 2.5 million vaccination campaigns to save children's lives.

I hope you enjoyed my presentation.
Do you got any questions ?



ICH WÄR EUCH RICHTIG DANKBAR!!! BITTE HELFT MIR
 

miss_bine

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Ich schaue es mir mal an, sollte ich abends mal noch dazu kommen diese Woche.
Als ich die Eurokom gemacht habe, haben uns die Lehrer geholfen bzw.
sich das mal angeschaut und paar Tips gegeben. Ist das bei euch nicht so?

Ich habe meine Eurokom damals mit dem Thema Dubai gemacht..
 

akin62

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Vielen dank dafür das du es anschaust ich wäre dir echt dankbar.. ;)
Nein die Lehrer helfen uns nicht ich hab sogar schon einmal gefragt,
deshalb weiß ich nicht wer mir helfen könnte und meine Hoffnung steckt
jetzt in euch..
 

miss_bine

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EUROKOM ENGLISCH

Good Morning…My name is Akin. The subject of today´s presentation is UNICEF. I´ll be talking about the funtion of UNICEF first, than move on to the history and after this, I´ll tell you something about UNICEF International and UNICEF Germany. And at last about the success from UNICEF.


UNICEF means

U = United
N = Nations
I = International
C = Children
E = Emergency
F = Fund

What do UNICEF?
UNICEF is the world organization for children's rights. UNICEF helps people in 150 countries and problem areas around the world. UNICEF supply children in the world with medical, builds water-wells and supply school-materials for millions of children. UNICEF but also helps to protect children from AIDS and from crime.

UNICEF history
UNICEF was established on December 11, 1946.
At the beginning UNICEF was an emergency organization. In the 50s the help was especially in the countries of Africa.
So UNICEF has been a development organization. In 1965 UNICEF gets the Nobel Peace Prize.

UNICEF International
UNICEF International is the only UN organization with volunteers. UNICEF works in more than 150 countries. They offer fast help for the humanity. The warehouse is in Copenhagen. UNICEF is funded entirely by voluntary funds and donations. UNICEF is funded completely by voluntary funds and donations. A criterion for the selection of a project is the country's infant mortality rate. The largest regional focus is Sub-Saharan Africa with 52.4%. The budget of UNICEF International is more than 2 billion U.S. $. The UNICEF headquarters are located in New York, there the donations will be distributed to aid projects. UNICEF has 7000 full-time staff worldwide. 90% of them work in the UNICEF program countries. UNICEF has a global presence.

UNICEF Germany
Was founded in 1953. UNICEF Germany gets no appropriation. At UNICEF Germany working 92 full-time employees and 8,000 volunteers. UNICEF Germany has conquered through greeting cards, gifts and scenario campaign *some entfernen* 21 million euros.

Success of UNICEF
The number of children enrolled *has entfernen* increased. Infant mortality has been halved since 1950. Each year 2.5 million vaccination campaigns *to entfernen* save children's lives.

I hope you enjoyed my presentation.
Thank you very much for your attention.
In case of any questions, do not hesitate to ask me now.


Was meinst du mit "warehouse"?
Ein paar Sachen habe ich ersetzt durch leichtere bzw. gängigere Wörter.
TIPP : UNICEF kommt sehr oft vor im Text, versuche es noch ein
wenig zu ersetzen, zu viele Wiederholungen.

Also so würde ich es schreiben, ob es so korrekt ist kann ich dir nicht sagen.. Bin auch kein Profi.. Das sind lediglich Vorschläge..

MFG
 

akin62

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Mit warehouse meine ich Warenlager. Ich bin dir echt so dankbar und bin echt froh darüber das du mir helfen konntest! Ich bin ja in englisch auch nicht so gut. Wenn ich am Freitag fertig bin sag ich dir was ich habe ;)
Und wenn ich dir irgendwie helfen kann dann sag es bitte ich bin dir echt dankbar
MFG
 

miss_bine

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Bitteschön. Kein Problem und natürlich dann viel Erfolg am Freitag. :thumpsup:

Kleiner Ansporn.. Ich habe die Prüfung mit 1,6 abgeschlossen.
Allerdings war das Listening Comprehension nicht so einfach. Aber machbar!

Gute Vorbereitung ist sehr wichtig, ich würde die Tage bis dahin noch gut nutzen.

MFG
 
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